You're turning five, getting so old
a sweetie too, you're brave and bold;
so very pretty, a sight to behold
granny has many tales that can be told.
Birthdays are fun, let's party awhile
have some fun, make everyone smile;
others say you've got your own style
you're real smart and very versatile.
Enjoy your party with some great friends
balloons, games and a cake that blends
icing and sprinkles; it all just extends
a super day you hope just never ends.
Author notes
A big girl now! Have a great birthday Aneka.
A contest entry
- ♥ Happy Birthday Aneka Bellingan ♥ by Rebekah-Ann.
1350 points, ended September 10, 2008, 12 entries
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Granny....yes, you love your granddaughter...I have one 6 years old...and he will be 7 Jan. 2nd....Whoooooooooooo....Yikes...It is busy...Lovely write dear!
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Happy Birthday
Love the rhyme
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that is such a beautiful poem Granny and will be something that Aneka can keep forever and look back on in her older years to remember her wonderful 5th birthday...she also seemed to love it, from the comment..great write
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A beautiful birthday tribute granny..I remember when my grandkids were this age and how big the world seem to tham. They just grow up too quickly.
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I had baloons that can stay up in the air. Did you know that if you blow it up with your mouth it doesn't work. You need to take it to the party shop and blow it up with the silver thing.
We had the best party! There was more friends than what mommy thought and we ran out of party packs.
hahahahaha
We jumped on the castle and we had a chocolate fountain.
Thank you for sending me a poem for my birthday!
I really love it when mommy read poems to me!
Anny
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Thank you very much for this lovely entry!!! She loved to be called a big girl! hehehe and you are surely right about all the things Granny has to say. LOL.
Thank you for entering and being part of this once in a liftime special birthday!
Rebekah
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wonderful sentiments
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Delightful and left me with a smile. Hard to ask for more.
Love, Tom B.
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