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God Awaits Our Prayers

In Africa, a child is born,
In poverty; disease.

No place for him to lay his head,

in a land where hope has ceased.

 

In England, a husband weeps;

for cancer took his wife.

He watched it creep within her veins,

as it stole her precious life.

 

In America, where addiction;

drowns a lost young soul.

Creates false illusions,

as darkness takes its toll.

 

In war, emotions rage;

battling in disgrace.

Separating reality,

while we eliminate our race.

 

Within, a cure for effect;

that ravishes the earth.

Flickering ray of hope,

placed at time of birth.

 

It flickers in the darkness,

creates a shadow of the soul.

When kindled it illuminates,

creating wisdom to grow.

 

God's face shines in the light,

that leads us through the dark.

He awaits in our desolate shells,

to initiate the spark. 

 

 

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  • Gods Lil Warrior
    September 22, 2008
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    This is a great poem.

    Keep up the great writing.

    Thanks for entering my contest.

  • Ace - LightWithinMe
    September 5, 2008
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    Hello. A compassionate write from you, which is often the case, as you point out that which unfortunately does need to be brought up. I feel this write has been done well, your rhythm and rhyme was done well, and it didn't read forced. I wish you well in the contests you are in. My regards.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 5, 2008

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    Humm..I agree with you completely my friend......I love it....well done..and my thanks for entring my contest...


  • Puppydog gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    I agree! Keep faith and hope and with prayer the wrong will lose and the kind of heart and soul will win.


  • who iam
    September 4, 2008

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    Heartfelt

    A tribute to mankind if only they would accept the finality of our most gracious forgiving God!
    Well done and good luck in this contest.

  • goalsv
    September 4, 2008

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    A wonderful piece on all the trials one can go through in this life. Because of sin all of these things are here. The finish is perfect as it gives hope in God and to let us know He waits for us.

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