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Daughter of the Moon

She rises from the silvery sighs of Earth
without time, nor space…
the firmament cradles her
Mother has called for her.
You will show your people
the light that is always within the darkness.
The night is alive for all to see.

Go now my daughter…
go spread the light

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    this is absolutely beautiful. you've written an amazing piece.. this one touched me and it did so more than once. you've penned a beautiful picture with your words..

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 5, 2008
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    'Daughter of a Goddess
    washing all fears away'
    pleasant readings
    from you I'll say.


  • condor gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    Very nice poem with wonderful wording. Maybe I'm silly, but i don't know where the photobucket is. Anyway, your poem brings light forward just by the way you set things out, and the flow was quite pleasant. Sounds like nature waking in the morning and spreading sunshine over the earth.


  • whos my humblepie
    September 4, 2008

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    I saw the pic in option B......
    I know what you were thinkin.....
    Thats a nice piece!