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Vision

you gave me a vision of prosperity
i waited and received your gift
broken dreams and illusions of reality
hollow words spoken from gaping mouths
this is your prosperity?  
then i want out

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    WOW.. now this is powerful.. a lot said in so few words. boy what a zinger.. the imagery that you've created with your words is very powerful and vivid.. excellent job with your poem and also with the prompt.


    good luck in the contest

    kat