Their up in heaven, looking down.
No pain and worries are around.
Smiles and happiness on their face.
Waiting for you at heaven's gate.
Until the day you can see them again.
You know they are watching over you my friend.
Sometimes missing them can make you blue and sad.
Just remember the good times to make you glad.
Their up in heaven, where they are free
They are still around you see,
In our hearts and thoughts until we join them.
Waiting for our eternity of happiness to begin.
They are in heaven, where they see you,
Putting their angel wings around you when you're blue
So just remember what I say
They aren't truely gone; you'll see them one day!
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Shortyonwhelz friend of princess of my love
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It flows wonderfully. xx thanks for the entry
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Really Good
This is good. Keep up the good work -
wow great example of a religious poem this great it made me remind myself of my grandmother not in the same sence though
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this is really good
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This is very good.Nice flow.Strong emotion.I like it.
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Oh, thats so sweet!
Im sure your friend is grateful for your comfort.
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Such beautiful words of comfort for your friend and im sure you have helped to make their heart a little lighter...thank you sweetheart for sharing
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your poem is very sweet. -
A lovely poem which generates a warm glow inside. Its always good to believe that loved ones we have lost will be re united with us one day. Lovely tenderly written poem
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Great
Makes me feel good inside... My lost family will see me again and I will see them again. Love you
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So true
Great job. It reminds me of my poem Here in Heaven.
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