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Go On

So go on
In your happiness
Go on
In your love for him

Replace your memories of me
With him
I'm only in your way

My feelings matter to no one
A joke that's been overused
I killed all chances with you
But your happiness means much more

I
Love
You
But go on
In your happiness
Go on
And let me drift away

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  • vampedvixen
    December 5, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest! I haven't had a chance to reply to any of the poems until now. I think there is such self-sacrifice in this poem, and I think that when you really love someone you can only know this by the amount of sacrificing you're willing to do for that person. The fact that their happiness meant more to you than your own really shows a depth of love that is incredible