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Beautiful Sighs

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passion's ambiance softly caressed
clutched in bouquets of satin desire,
tender blossoms of romance
flutter in arousal of warmth,

wanton pleasures rise
quivering as petals kissed by hunger's breath
liquefying longing held against release,

sweet scent of fascination
fondles euphoric lips,
savoring seduction of beautiful sighs.

 

 

 

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  • individuality gold member
    June 22

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    ah those tender blossoms of romance and wanton passions, they skip with love, right into the heart's sheets. a good poem.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    *sigh* indeed!! The picture is beautiful and you have crafted a poem that captures it sensually and with class! Congrats on the bronze!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    Those are some beautiful sighs.

    Congrats on the bronze.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Beautiful sensuality absorbing those moments in stunning lines and words.
    Best wishes in the contest hun
    Julie


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    Oh this was breath-taking indeed.
    Loved the sensual aura of this piece
    it brings forth with such tender,
    passionate words. Beautiful imagery
    and language expressed throughout.

    The last stanza was just brilliantly crafted with

    "sweet scent of fascination
    fondles euphoric lips,
    savoring seduction of beautiful sighs."

    --"beautiful sighs" -- just a wonderful thought.. really love that expression

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 11, 2008
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      Thank you for the kind comment and for bronze. I enjoyed writing for your contest.

      Linda


  • penman gold member
    September 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    Such a creative and sensual write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Gorgeous, you have done a fine interpretation of this picture. I love the soft sensuality. Best to you in the contest


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      September 4, 2008
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      It is a beautiful pic isn't it? Thank you for the lovely comment, much appreciated.

      Linda


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 4, 2008

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    oooooooooooooooooooo my ... lol.... great write here.... thanks for sharing this.. and good luck in your contest..... hugs

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