a cleansing release of life's
failures are the rainbows of
our souls that tears forgot
the inner voice of our sorrows
calls out when fear replaces
the saddened truth
God's promises are revealed as
we experience the real triumph
of life
Author notes
prompt:
quote #1
"The soul would have no rainbow, had the eyes no tears." J. Cheney
A contest entry
- PIF Picture & Quote Prompts! by perfectsunset.
575 points, ended October 7, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A great take from the prompt
you paint this so well in your words
the inner voice of our sorrows..
Best wishes
Julie
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Beautiful take on the quote prompt you chose. I loved that quote and you really pulled on the words to give it strength and inner voice that spoke volumes.
This is so full of genuine emotion and thoughts-
a treasure to read.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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