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Chains...

A tied & broken heart
throbbing for a release...
for a freedom...

But the chains are latched
and the demons are pulling...
harder and harder...

"But if your eyes are bad,
your whole body
will be full of darkness...
If then the light within you is darkness,
how great is that darkness!"

Author notes

yeah it's not finished...but at least its started so hopefully i can come back and finish it. um the quote is out of the book of Job, I can't for the life of me remember what verse it is though! so if I find it again I will let you know. anyways let me know what you think.

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  • x-Valiant-x
    October 5, 2008

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    A tied & broken heart
    throbbing for a release...
    for a freedom...

    AWSOMNESSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT>>>


  • The Imperfection
    September 17, 2008

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    FINISH. now.

    I'm serious! now!







    ...well what are ya waiting for?!?



    I absolutely adore how you used something you learned for your poetry...that's how it's meant to be. Beautiful. and simply devine.