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Playtime

Missing image
Soft feathery thoughts
float through the recesses
of my muse

Ideas crave substance
to nourish physic…

Playful emancipation
interrupts my work.

I accomplish nothing with
plenty of time on my hands.

Symphony of life must wait
as I meditate on mundane
chores at hand…

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    I love this poem a lot. excellent take on the prompt. I love the opening stanza.. excellent job with this poem

    good luck in the contest

    kat