I wake to find you watching me;
your smile gentle.
Reaching, your tender hands
caress my neck; your soft
lips rekindle life.
Stretching, I feel desire course
through my body.
I reach for you. That knowing
sparkle fills your eyes;
you push me back on the pillows…
…and hand me a cup of coffee.
I am blessed,
my morning angel.
Author notes
A 
... a 
... a 
... we each have favorite "morning quickies" 
Option E.
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: www.photobucket.com
30 – 60 words
A contest entry
- Anyone Up For A Morning Quickie?? HUH?? by Sweet Impatience.
850 points, ended September 6, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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this is wonderful!
i love it!
i want a morning angel!
you make me jelous
lol
caress my neck....
hummm
that sounds so good -
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You missed the point
I'm a coffee-holic But I will admit, the caresses do make it better 
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LOL, well done.
And congrats on the silver!
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congratulations on the silver.
well deserved
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this sounds nice... hmmm I really love this poem a lot.. did you want your
hot or cold?? Iced is really good you know.. especially with whipped cream & a cherry... lol
your poem is excellent. beautiful imagery..this has a very calm, peaceful feel to it.. this would be nice cup of coffee in the morning with someone you love
good luck in the contest
kat
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made me grin
is your AN a part of the poem too?lol -
Oh! how beautiful!! It's soft sweet and tender! I want someone who will give me a cup of coffee in the morning!! lol.. You really did such a wonderful job with this write.. I'm sure that sissy will love it! best of luck in the contest..
Angel
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nice...i like the ending, made me smile. loved ones with coffee to greet you in morning's light, gotta love it!
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