look who's five! by Swangrnv at All poetry

Wow! what a joy to be five!
I'm betting you can't wait for the day to arrive
what with all the joy and cake it will bring
just the thoughts of it, makes my heart sing..
Momma, and daddy they see their little one is growing up!

psst! between you and I?
I'll pass around my secret 'donation' cup
that way you get even more loot, heck you'll be rich!
now make sure you keep that little trick amongst us two
so this time year you can use the same pitch! hehehe
yeah, i know it's a bit shifty
but i know mom and dad,won't mind giving you the 'extra' gift see?
Happy birthday sweet little lady
and may you see many more..past the age of eighty!

Author notes

Dedicated to my friend's little jewel,Aneka on her birthday

A contest entry

♥ Happy Birthday Aneka Bellingan ♥ by Rebekah-Ann. 1350 points, ended September 10, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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glenn shannon
May 11

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i got mine begging for grand prix tickets when they were little and we had so many we sold some so i could get in , its not shifty its business acument .. very cute write , loved it
- Swangrnv
  May 12
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  l.o.l.
  tickets to the grand prix!?..that sounds..GRAND! l.o.l.. thanks alot my friend again for your comment and support..
geckogirl
December 29, 2008
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this is too cute. Shifty as a rat... love your work... that something I would do...
storiesuntold
September 11, 2008
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Too cute
And happy birthday from me as well great write here
- Swangrnv
  September 11, 2008
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  Thank u
  Yes it seems the little one had a great birthday! appreciate your comment and support my friend.
Aneka Bellingan
September 10, 2008
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Eighty??? wowie that is soooo old!! I am already rich I got R250 for my birthday and bought a Cloey Brat doll and a Cinderella doll. Mommy got me a Baby Yasmyn Brat doll and Granny got me the big Yasmyn Brat doll.

Mommy said that I have more money than her now. hehehe she is silly!!!

Thank you for my poem! I like it allot!

Anny
Rebekah-Ann
September 10, 2008
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Hey my friend!!!

Thank you so very much for taking part in the contest! This poem is so cute! Thank you so much for making our little Jewel's day so special! I really appreciate it. She was so happy to receive all these printed poems Friday morning. Thank you again!!!

Rebekah
PerVirtuous
September 9, 2008
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I am taking this advice. Are you an accountant? Love the concept.
- Swangrnv
  September 11, 2008
  
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  l.o.l.
  no I'm not! but you may have given me an idea! thanks so much for your reading and commenting!
Arizona Sunset
September 6, 2008
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beautiful birthday poem for a special lil gal blessings always ~Trisha~
- Swangrnv
  September 6, 2008
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  Thanks!
  I appreciate your kind words my friend, thank you for always being there
secberm
September 6, 2008

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Cute, bro Another kiddie write by who I'm guessing is a big kid himself. Write on and good luck.

Dez
- Swangrnv
  September 6, 2008
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  l.o.l.
  yeah, you right my man..guilty as charged! l.o.l. thanks for the read, and comment!
Passionate Phoenix
September 5, 2008
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gosh! what a piece to make you remember back to your 5th!! brilliant!!
- Swangrnv
  September 5, 2008
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  thanks
  yeah, my friend's little one is having that big 5yr. deal! l.o.l. yeah, oh how i wish..
albymyheart
September 5, 2008

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So cute!
So you're teaching her all the tricks real young I see! lol. Good on ya! Looks like you'll be the favourite surrogate uncle then...great idea and good luck in the contest...alby
- Swangrnv
  September 7, 2008
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  l.o.l.
  Thanks, my friend glad you like the piece
  and I appreciate your voteof confidence.
Mrs LadyEnthralling
September 4, 2008

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so sweet knuckle head hon. you did a very great job with this made a joy braze my thoughts hon. good luck in the contest
- Swangrnv
  September 4, 2008
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  hey jewels!
  Thanks my friend, very happy you enjoyed this write.
moluv10
September 4, 2008

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very sweet birthday wish here bro. You always have time to think of others and that's a quality not very many people have. Keep on doing your thing homie!
- Swangrnv
  September 4, 2008
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  thanks kid!
  mucho gracias! l.o.l.
xPink-Lotusx
September 4, 2008

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Awwwwww sweet! Very cute and very sweet.. It was also very sweet of you to write for your friends kid like this. Well done!
- Swangrnv
  September 4, 2008
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  thanks
  yeah, she's a sweet lady, and I don't mind helping my friends, if I can! besides, her little one is a doll!