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It is Only Her

It is only her whose beauty blinds me to all others
Only she relieves my pains

Only she so dominates my dreams

 

It is only her whose radiance lights my path 

In none save her do I find pleasure

In none save her do I find joy

 

It is only her whose touch can melt my heart of ice
Only in her do I find comfort
Only in her do I find peace


It is only her who brings out such passion in me

None but her body feels so right against my own

None but her kiss excites me

 

It is only her who can hold my love
It is only her that I need to survive

It is only her that I love for none but her can make me feel

 

Author notes

Dedicated to the one that I love, Winters Recluse, though it does not do her justice

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  • White The Hyperion
    October 22, 2008
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    ^_^

  • White The Hyperion
    October 22, 2008

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    Dude...this thing is amazing...never thought you'd write a love poem...but you proved me wrong...and dude if i had the aplause to give i'd give you thirty...you are a great writer...and this poem is filled with a lot of emotion


  • azlyn gold member
    September 23, 2008
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    Adding Clappies!!!


  • Pretty Girl
    September 4, 2008

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    Amazing

    Wow BEAuTiFUl I loved everything about this and I dont really have a favorite part it's all awesome. I have thought about someone like this before and that is where i am right now actually. i want that person to know that i care.. I love the title it really makes it a great poem.. It doesnt matter that you use It is only her alot that is what sets you apart from everyone else. i would love for you to make another poem like this because it is very very romantic.


  • Prince The Ripper
    September 4, 2008

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    This was indeed a great write Insanity, emotion flowed intertwined with each graceful word, but, I found it also a little too reapeatative with "It is only" Try different combinations of the words, same thing but written different rather then having the start off each line with the same thing, I am not criticising but merely stating my opinion for you to learn and improve, other then that this was truly inspirational to the one you have come to love.

    Goodluck, you got Talent

    Razorblade/ VermillionSilence


  • Falcon SilverWolf
    September 4, 2008

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    *squeels and pounces on you kissing you* i love you andy!! this was so beautiful omg i loved it!! it braught me to tears! goodluck your sure to win!

  • azlyn gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    This is a dedication that sings a glorious song to the wonder of love! I am certain this heart you adore is blessed beyond all measure by such a lovely honest expression of truth and devotion. Thank you for this entry!


    Az

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