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Rejection

Missing image
Broken heart
A sad song by Mozart
Crystal teardrops fall without a sound

Like a springtime shower they shatter on the ground
I have lost my heart, it is no where to be found
Feelings of bittersweet affection

Missing lost perfection
Rejection


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  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    September 4, 2008

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    Wow.
    In just a few lines you captured all the emotions and spread them out for all to see!
    Amazing poem hun


    Stay safe
    Love to you
    ~Manda


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 6, 2008
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      Great Comment

      Good morning Amanda, I appreciate you stopping by and reading. Always brings me a smile. Have a wonderful weekend. You take care, Sandy
  • mcheadle
    September 4, 2008

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    Pretty , in simple write, and so complete in view

    The beauty is that of wonder and so simply put to view. Never mind the song as the pain is of you.
    The song only helps the pain find a way to run it's self out. And when it is over The little angel will no longer have the sad pout...mac


    • Sandygram silver member
      September 6, 2008
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      Good Morning Mac

      I love your little poem within your comment. You slways brighten my day when I come on in the morning. Hope you are well today. Hugs and Smiles to you.

      Sandy