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First Met

I sit here waiting paitiently for you
on this peaceful sunny and warm day
watching the birds and trees to name a few
you walk up to sit with me under the sun
barefoot and free with sand under our feet
we laugh and run just to have some fun
you take my hand to make the world dissappear
you look into my eyes of blue ocean waves
I smile as things start to become clear
our words begin to slow as we get closer
you move closer to make the first move
we kiss our first kiss to always remember
time seemed to stand still just for us
we rest closer to our warm bodies
ambitions lost to our care free lust
friendship melts to lovers will be
our hearts aflutter this first meet
we hold and we kiss so pationately
this I dream while on the phone
awaken by the sound of your hello.

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  • Jeb
    September 4, 2008

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    Great!

    You did a damn good job with poem! The flow it has is incredible! And the words/message are very sweet and loving. I really, really like this poem. I like how it kinda leaves me wondering if this dream is dead and you are yearning for bygone days, or if it still lives and is going just as strong as ever. Kickass job once again!