sun shines on red
and face
of innocence
said
both of their
own greetings
one of lasting
one of hope
twined
kept
and awaiting
another
autumn
and for
each
other
the contempt
for
silence
meant
Author notes
1. Picture Credit: Stephanie Wood & just what I saw in the photo.
A contest entry
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450 points, ended September 19, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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aw..this is deep, the poem drags you into its own void, nicely done, and good luck. thanks for entering
Stephanie ♥ -
This one marks a very lovely space in my heart since I can relate it to the autumn season so splendidly, though I know it goes much, much deeper than that. I am looking for a turn of season in my own life now, and so this makes me wish all the more deeply that it will transpire! Tand, you are a masterpiece!
Always <3,
Brit
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Beautifully written. Very deep.
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Your words are left hanging in the air. So much said and yet a lot to be discovered. I enjoyed this - it has honesty and finesse.
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