Spiralled inspiration with illusionary curves,
bringing contemplation to everyone it serves.
On a journey through a spectral plane, reflected panoply,
landscape of delusion, is what my mind can see.
Darkness with a subtle jest, reveals a slivered light,
ghosted with a warmness, my senses to ignite.
Cerebral activation, kaleidoscope of thought,
or an image of confusion, occluded and distraught.
Complexity it feigns to show, with abstract overtones,
understated mystery and a thousand more unknowns .
Now paint your mind in spirals, with fey artistic skill,
then let the picture take you, to lead you where it will..
Author notes
Black Narcissu.
Credit : http://gi262.photobucket.com/groups/ii84/4P6X685J0/ws_Inspiration_1680x1050.jpg
A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
This is really lovely 'Black Narcissu'....great wording and images - and a beautiful flow to this. I really like the picture you've painted with your words.
Thank you for this entry.
best wishes in the contest
-
Aloha! Great take on the picture....
I think you meant "curves".....Spiralled inspiration with illusionary cuves,
Might want to double check for typos!
Best wishes in the contest...
Write on!
Adding your comment:
