It had been 3 months since,
We had last seen one another,
Meeting up was just inconveinent,
And I'd forgotten just how much I care.
To see your face again,
Brought me to tears infront of you,
Not having you in my life,
Made me feel so incomplete.
I made the mistake of staring in your eyes,
I felt so helpless like I always used to feel,
Now that I'm thinking these things again,
I know I need you here with me.
If only you would talk to me,
And feel the same as I do,
The connection was broken all that time ago,
And now needs to be serviced and repaired.
Busy lives and things to do,
Study and work and little time to play,
I now think I need you always,
For without you I'm an unfinshed puzzle.
Driving in my car last night,
Coming back from your pad,
Made me think how much I want,
To be driving to you more often.
I thought about how long ago it was,
Since we had first kissed,
That the anniversary had already been and passed,
Over a year ago now and yet it seems so close.
Oh how I've missed your company,
And companionship and touch,
Just have a cuddle from you,
Would sooth my sorrows away.
I need you now my darling,
For you complete this jigsaw,
You make me who I am,
And I am who I want to be.
A contest entry
- Memorable moments by Barefoot poet.
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that is simply owesome.
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Great write....
"Oh how I've missed your company,
And companionship and touch,
Just have a cuddle from you,
Would sooth my sorrows away."
that is exactly how i feel...keep up the great work...good luck and thank you for entering my contest... -
nawww such a sweet poem i loved the last verse the best...it finished it off just nicely
Thanks so much for entering my contest and best of luck!!
keep writing!!
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OMG!!
Cold chills..
You made me frown not smile.
I loved this though very much so..
All the words in it reminded me of everything in my life..
Oh dear lord.. thanks for sharing this..
Beautiful write.
good luck in the contest.
-Mandi
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oh lol didn't mean to make you frown! It's my favourite piece because its so romantic, thought it would make you smile
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Oh the pain that love can inflict on one (and the joys) a strong powerful write that holds all the heartache that most of us go through at sometime in our lives. How do we ever exist?( somehow we do and end up wondering what all the fuss was about A fine write and an enjoyable read
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Beautiful thank you for sharing!
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I was going to say how much I liked the last verse, but I see that's already been done so i'll mention the second to last verse,
Oh how I've missed your company,
And companionship and touch,
Just have a cuddle from you,
Would sooth my sorrows away.
Which is just as wonderful.
Thankyou for entering my contest, and good luck.
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I need you now my darling,
For you complete this jigsaw,
You make me who I am,
And I am who I want to be.
Such a wonderful last verse...the last line speaks of strength and resolve. Wonderful write...and so nice to see you again!!!
Az
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