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Birthday wish

A little girl Aneka
Already a poet in AP,
She has several trophies to her credit
Though yet to complete her fifth birth day.
Wish you, my little friend
Be it a memorable day,
Enjoy the day with friends
Giving them your favorite potato
And all they love.
I am away, cannot be with you,
But my best wishes will fly
And definitely reach you.
With all love and affection
I send you this humble poem
Take it, my friend, with your superb sweetness.

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  • headintheclouds
    October 23, 2008
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    Nice poem. Sweet birthday wishes! Good Write Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!


  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    October 8, 2008

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    I love this write, it is very sweet and your kind words are lovely.. Thanx for entering.. Best wishes


  • Aneka Bellingan
    September 10, 2008

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    we ate potato chips on Friday Thank you for sending me this poem, my mom printed it and gave it to me. I also took it to school and all my friends heard my poems.

    I think that the poem fly from your world to my world hey?

    Anny

    mommy? how does it come to our computer if they are over the sea?


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    Thank you so much for painting Aneka's day so brightly pink with your beautiful birthday wishes!

    Presenting this as part of her birthday gift was a great idea, I saw how her little face lid up. Thank you kindly!!

    Becks


  • PerVirtuous
    September 9, 2008
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    Very sweet.

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