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Face ( HM )

Pale face unmasked,

hidden identity paused,

Ponders on thoughts..

captured in blinks,

fearful the tear

cascading upon cheek

tissue cleansed.

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Option 5
20 words

A contest entry

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    WOW.. another brilliant poem by you.. this is such a deep & thought provoking write.. I so love the first line right off the bat. the second one too.

    Brilliant job on both the prompt & your poem.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 4, 2008

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    this is deep.... wow..... love it.... way to reach in.... great job.. good luck in contest..... hugs....


  • maralisa silver member
    September 4, 2008

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    wow julie a brilliant poem with some deep emotions from line one through to line seven good luck in the contest my friend take care marina


  • Age of Rain
    September 4, 2008
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    *waits excitedly*