a big bang explodes
from centre within core
noise unheard
trembled across universe
split of a second
galaxies were made
thrown across
without rhyme
but adjusted to symphony
colors of all hues
drifting in nebulae
settled to warm,
for creatures take root
magma cooled
hard rocks manifest
trace of eruptions erased
unless one goes back
conducts carbon dating
fission breaks
dissipated energy
as big bang did
fusion unites, release energy
as big crunch
creation started
at begining,
big crunch
collects broken pieces,
at end
Author notes
Venu Gopal
Big Bang to Big Crunch
credit 'http://gi262.photobucket.com/groups/ii84/4P6X685J0/ws_Inspiration_1680x1050.jpg'
A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
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1 - 5 of 5
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I like this! Great wording and images, just lovely! I like so many lines, but especially,
'split of a second
galaxies were made
thrown across
without rhyme' - great image.
I also really like how you've ended this,
'creation started
at begining,
big crunch
collects broken pieces,
.....at end'
Very nicely done. Thank you for your entry.
best wishes in the contest
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very sweet write Ven. ♥
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excellent take on the prompt. best of luck in the contest.
Slayer -
Great take on the prompt!
Best wishes in the contest my friend!
Write on and on!
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wow a fantastic take on the promt full of some amazing imagery dad good luck in the contest
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