my choice in men always sucks,
they are often after my bucks,
trailing my life that is super deluxe,
their mental state is always in flux.
They think I am Scheherazade.
In the papers they place their ad.
Each one is sure to be a deadbeat dad,
And for certain things always get bad.
Problems to myself I don’t need to add.
Matters turn terribly sad,
as either the guy is totally mad,
full of complexes and so fat,
unsure of himself and such a brat,
he is an ass and hates my cat
only cares for his stupid rat,
thinks he is significant and
wears a political hat,
but he is nothing but a tat.
He has nothing to do but to spat,
about vain nothings carrying out a useless chat.
Him, Life from its mouth accidentally, spat,
a stupid ugly stingy as hell psychopath.
I console myself and sing a scat.
Wise guys, tell me what to do and not be a doormat!
Author notes
Sometimes women become magnet for zombies and losers and it is a shame really. probably in one's life one has passed through these situations 
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Ooh soooo true!!
I have been in this situation
for years lol ever since guys
started liking me... and it sucks!
It's hard to find the wise guys,
though sometimes they're standing
right in front of you, we just tend to
push them aside... lol, well i do
Anyways loved this~
thanks for entering & best of luck -
brutal analysis.
Hello Nermin...the poet's experience with men does not seem to be worthwhile...may the good Lord send her an angel from heaven...Amen...A great poem..enjoyed.
Rahbar.
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You scared the living shit out of me, I hate those figures, I cant even watch childrens tellie anymore 'cause they have this scary moving dolls.
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before, when we were kids we loved stories like that
we wanted to be scared and screamed and enjoyed it, now this is becoming really scary as one grows older one knows and discovers that there is no real protection against these things. and thinking of a rabbit or something else or a human being who is obsessed is quite scary. i am having goosebumps
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hehe
You do have a point in that
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could it be the spirit of a dead bunny?
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Probably, dont know.
But that bunny is scary, red eyes and everything. Just sits outside my window and stares in. Since I live in the basement I have a wondow just about a inch from the ground.
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I did not know what ugly picture I could put for the characters I gathered in one, so I thought maybe that humpty dumpty would be it, so deformed, malformed, and thinking he got a big biiiiig brain and wearing a bow and suit, well a mutation of what could be close to a human creature
) sorry if I scared you, but I guess such specimen should be scary, although some of them come sometimes in good packages that when unwrapped you discover the void in there and it was only the wrapping paper ))
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hehe, I've always been scared of those dolls, ever since I was a child.
I had teddies, other had barbie's
But the image sure goes well with the poem, just that the scared the crap out of me when I first saw it. You should have seen me, I was shooting out my chair like a rocket and clinged to the roof! -
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you are scaring me now
yes i believe these things exist, the fact that i didnt see something clear like that is one thing, and knowing that they exist is another. here too if i say i heard something or think i saw something, they keep saying maybe you are imagining.....
the brain tries to refuse these mysterious things but they do exist. that is scary living beside a graveyard -
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Its only anoing when a new one moves in, I notice it very well if they died agains't they're will. They knock on my walls, open and closes the doors and tear down anything that isn't stable.
But its fun, I had my sister and friend over for a horror movie the day afther a new one moved in and he made so much noice that they ran outside screaming >:3
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:))))))))))))))))
humpty dumpty the frog))
I am so sorry, didnt know that this would scare someone)my goodness )) but actually i am more afraid not these losers because you can kick them in the arse and get rid of them, but I am really afraid of the vampires who exist among us in the garments and masks of normal humans. when my mom watches Angel of Buffy and says that it is crap, i see it as reality, those horrible people living to feed on our blood (efforts and existence not really blood although it is like sucking our blood)
I tell her that they exist, what would she call those parasites and also harmful people around us?
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I live next to a graveyard, I see zombies every day, I tried showing mom, but she couldn't see 'em! (Am I mad or are they inviseble?)
Mh...If they dont believe they dont see because they're brain refuses it. -
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good that you are taking it like that
great that you are not scared, i think my blood would freeze and never take it this way. i could die of a heart attack -
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Hehe, I am scared of the white bunny tho...I first saw it when I took a short cut trough the graveyard to toss my trash in the dumpster and it ran next to me, then all the lights died, from that day on I never took that shortcut again and I've seen the bunny outside my window several times and I get scared every time
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Thank you for reading and commenting destpite being horrified
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Very funny indeed. It is a shame that so many Men are that way, their mommies didn't bring them up very well did they? Good luck...Scott
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well, it goes both ways, there are also men who attract women who are losers too, but it is more common in the men's world)
Thank you my dear for passing by and commenting)
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LOL! I can so totally relate! This one is really good! Thanks for the entry!
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well written....it seems comical...i love it
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thank you dear
Thanks for appreciating it. you are so kind. and thank you for the honorable mention. it made my day
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YOU ARE SO RIGHT!!!
I myself see many women who always seem to go after this type of man and also men who go after this type of woman. What exactly is the attraction of opposites! It never works out in the end.
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Superb plus
A tremendously, funny satirical write. Even as a male I love your imagery. I chuckled all the way through.
I won't offer any advice. But again, it was quite funny, for a very serious topic. -
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You made me laugh by laughing at it
My dear Clovis, you always always make my days and nights by your comments and boost my ego. LOVE YOU SO MUUUUUCH
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You are quite welcome, indeed. My regards.
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