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A Snow White Kiss

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                 Upon a heart of warmth

                 mismatched dreams collide

                 Snow white kiss; Heavenly bliss

                 Our forbidden love freezes the world

                 as your soul shows me peace

                 in this wonderland of ours...

                                                                            

                                                                           

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Option 4
10 Poets
20 - 30 words
45 minutes MAX...
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Words:30

My muse died!!!

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  • rbruce gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    An excellent and creative poem from the picture prompt.
    I just love the ending where peace is found. A worthy trophy winner.


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    September 7, 2008
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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    You muse has resurrected from the dead, because it's not dead anymore.

    This was a beautifully written piece.


    • Angelflower
      September 4, 2008
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      thank you very much.. I tried.. It was a hard poem to write actually.. but thanks for your comment cousin!


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Your muse died, I don't think so my dear, this is such a great interpretation of the prompt, real and honest. Best to you in the contest

    • Angelflower
      September 4, 2008
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      Thank you very much for your kind comment.. I'm glad that you liked it..


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 4, 2008

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    another awesome write...... wish i was writing but mine still would never be this good..... hugs and good luck....

    • Angelflower
      September 4, 2008
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      Sissy. your muse will come back, and you write beautifully!


  • maralisa silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    wow a brilliant take on the promt very deeply moving with its beauty good luck in the contest


  • Kari gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Forbidden love can actually be a blessing in disguise. Sometimes people need to be changed and if that's the only way to make it happen so be it. I think it's wonderful when people are changed because of love rather for negative or good. It makes all of us stronger in the end no matter what the outcome is.


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    your muse isnt dead
    this is beautiful my flower angel
    i love you


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    NO IT DIDN'T!!!! your muse is alive and well.. I can see it through out this entire poem..
    this is beautiful to me.. I love it very much, it warms the heart.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Oh be quiet!!! Your muse isn't dead at all!!!
    This is so lovely and sweet sissy!! awwww



    • Angelflower
      September 4, 2008
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      Yesh yesh it is! lol. I know I could have done better.. I just can't think on how..lol. But thanks sissy..


  • Age of Rain
    September 4, 2008

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    ooooh. you liked this pic too! *smiles*

    'mismatched dreams collide'

    beautiful!

    'as your soul shows me peace
    in this wonderland of ours...'

    an awwwwww! moment.

    Very well writ!


    • Angelflower
      September 4, 2008
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      Lol.. you read mine the sametime I read yours..lol.. Thanks.. My muse died..lol.But I still tried! I loved the picture!!

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