Soul descends ...
into the waiting
yet silent
hands of fate
whilst a mind ...
now free from torment
lingers among
forgotten spirits
upon the cliffs
of insanity
Author notes
Option 1> Image titled "surrender" by FaerieNymph on www.deviantart.com .
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest!! by Sweet Impatience.
1080 points, ended September 7, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
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Excellent and powerful read! Well done!
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a brilliant take on the promt very deep and meaningful good luck in the contest
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It was very nice. loved reading it. It may have looked short but it held a lot of meaning and feeling behind it, which made it to me, the perfect length.
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Impressive.. i liked it and enjoyed readin it
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this is a very powerful poem.. WOW! excellent take on the prompt. life will most definitely make one feel like this, insane. life has a tendency to do that to me.
Excellent take on the prompt.
good luck in the contest
kat
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'yet silent
hands of fate'
vivid and deep!
'lingers among
forgotten spirits'
nice!
this is both haunting and beautiful. well done!
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Wow.. I love that! Sometimes you feel like you're going insane in this life, and ache for the soul to be free!
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