the world is black and white
and cold
but every once in a while
you'll come across
a pink bench
you know what that means
penguins are gonna dance
soon
Author notes
picture prompt #4
photo credit : photobucket
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest!! by Sweet Impatience.
1080 points, ended September 7, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well done. You are always a winner in my book.
Garrison

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how does one say thank you when it's not just a polite response?
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this really compliments the prompt...despite the coldness of reality, there is always that glimmer of hope...lovely penning


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a great take on the promt love the imagery of dancing penquins good luck in the contest


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thank you
glad you like it.
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...I'm waiting for the penguins...


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have faith. they'll come. until then let my poems entertain you lol
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this is a brilliant poem that you have written.. this brought a smile to my face.. and I'm still smiling.. oh yes I am.. sometimes we are just so busy involved with our own lives that we don't often take the time to enjoy the simple things in life.. they are all around us.. we just need to stop and take a look..
good luck in the contest
kat


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Aww.. and what truth there is in that!! There is always a pink bench somewhere despite the cold of the world at times!


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yeah but sometimes we're in a rush and we don't notice
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