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and this is what he told me


the world is black and white
and cold

but every once in a while
you'll come across
a pink bench

you know what that means

penguins are gonna dance

soon


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picture prompt #4
photo credit : photobucket

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  • CaliOkie silver member
    September 6, 2008
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    Well done. You are always a winner in my book.

    Garrison


    • charcoal
      September 6, 2008
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      how does one say thank you when it's not just a polite response?


  • Jersene gold member
    September 5, 2008

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    this really compliments the prompt...despite the coldness of reality, there is always that glimmer of hope...lovely penning


  • maralisa silver member
    September 4, 2008
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    a great take on the promt love the imagery of dancing penquins good luck in the contest


  • just mercedes gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    ...I'm waiting for the penguins...


    • charcoal
      September 4, 2008
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      have faith. they'll come. until then let my poems entertain you lol


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    this is a brilliant poem that you have written.. this brought a smile to my face.. and I'm still smiling.. oh yes I am.. sometimes we are just so busy involved with our own lives that we don't often take the time to enjoy the simple things in life.. they are all around us.. we just need to stop and take a look..

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Aww.. and what truth there is in that!! There is always a pink bench somewhere despite the cold of the world at times!


    • charcoal
      September 4, 2008
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      yeah but sometimes we're in a rush and we don't notice

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