Small insignificant signs
play us by life's thread;
teasing the knowledge we hold.
Deep down in hallways
are lost thoughts - concealed.
I only know false sides
of a belief I trusted into.
Author notes
32 words - Sorry, I went over...
Option 5: Photobucket
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest!! by K a t.
1080 points, ended September 7, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
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congrats on the hm
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i hear your words... i feel your words.... so very deep..... good luck in your contest.... thanks for sharing.... missed ya
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wow a very powerfully penned poem full of strong emotions from stanza one through to stanza three the background is brilliant to good luck in the contest
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this is so good my dragon goddess
you are simply amzeing
a moving poem and a great background
well done sweets -
Wow.. you really did such a wonderful job!! It's really amazing how much you've "grown" in your poetry!!
I love it! thank you very much for sharing! something I'm sure many can relate to in a way 
Best of luck!
Angel
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You sound like a devotee to a religion and like you just found out that it was all lies and there really is no God nor will salvation be seeking you....powerfully deep....I like this!!! Best of wishes
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this sums up life... mine at times in a nutshell.. especially lines 4 & 5.. You did an excellent job with this one.. WOW!!! excellent take on the prompt..
Fantastic poem
good luck in the contest
kat
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Oh boy.. holy moly.. that hits me hard sis!!! You kinda summed my whole life up in those words!!
A superb write!!!!
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