So you think in future, forgetting the past,
you put a blessing, a request thinking blue
without doubting much better that black or
gray will hope for prey by dint of a hearing.
By a force of writing, should I say you about,
what wonderful azure heals all sentences awhile
that the mischievous blue done smiles, when hatred
surround your tears to hang on my visions to flow.
Should think the precious moments have a clarity
stars in your eyes in skies of my soul, What a luck,
going to hurt me when you come, you leave monotonous
with frustration in drunkenness on joy at an outset.
To say, Why life is so, happiness even reverses,
tarnishes the sun, burns a want to touch, to achieve
would be my hope for a better tomorrow without backwards
leaving sorrows on a tour to flower destiny with no pasts.
Beyond the times gone make me cry in pieces of
misfortune, to believe forgetting is much better
than to little happiness, makes us both dream in,
Is it enough to smile a bit in a serene blue sky?
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: OPTION 2 PHRASE PROMPT
bits of blue sky in your smile.
(contributed by a most brilliant poetess, checkmate )
A contest entry
- Proudly Presenting: ROUND 2 (: by Walk-Free.
1500 points, ended October 7, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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aww
this is a great take on the promp! it was a soft, gentle write! imagery was powerful, keep penning, thanks for this awesome entry!
~beauty of silence
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please credit the phrase to checkmate~
"Beyond the times gone make me cry in pieces of
misfortune, to believe forgetting is much better
than to little happiness, makes us both dream in,
Is it enough to smile a bit in a serene blue sky?"
absolutely beautiful
brilliant imagery; i enjoyed this very much~
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