thoughts fell as beads
scatterd all over floor
collect one by one
weave them into glittering necklace
beads that are broken
unfit for symmetry,
discard them gently
not thrown away
they may fit in cornice.
mind carry thoughts
akin to living beings in ocean
floating,
yet surviving on one another.
deepest thoughts
happen instantaneous,
comes out like flash
from out of dark thunder.
Deep thought shatters
gerk our whole being
we may not weave then,
small beads
under its iintense light,
comes out with such force.
calm weaves thoughts
when silence restores,
disturbed is a stray one
with potential
to make all other shambles.
Author notes
weaving thoughts
A contest entry
- Weaver by james119.
600 points, ended September 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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As a friend of mine was fond of saying: "don't mess with the delicate machinery", when speaking of his mental balance.
The thought line in this is engaging
Thanks for the entry -
a brilliant take on the promt very deep full of great emotion good luck in the contest dad maralisa
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