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picture Prompt : "Sorrow from Beyond the Sea"

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Battlegrounds now shaky

flames of fire are thrown

sounds of popping soaring

another round is blown

Screaming’s getting louder

One by one they’re stripped

a soldier lies there dying

with picture clamped to chest

A lover is now weeping

and children wonder why

daddy has now gone away

and mother can only cry

Our flag drapes the coffin neatly

family and friends will mourn

He has died with all the honor

a soldier could have worn

 

As the eulogy’s being read

his companion loses all

Sorrow’s dancing in her head

to his side she falls.

Her tears stain the coffins rail

the officers can’t break her free

Tiny hands are embracing her

as her heart faces misery

Guns are sounding off

another eleven to go

Skies are collecting remnants

of memories that will help them grow

One final kiss upon his wedding band

a gentle peace now comforts her

A man of such honor and glory

a true life warrior

Rising up with kids in tow

she stands beside him now

Reminiscing of the past

she’ll make it out somehow

Departing the service

her eyes are on her children

A smile that hints their face,

makes the rest of life worth livin.’

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  • The Drifter
    September 16, 2008

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    Bravo, Bravo--Excelent--You hit the mark perfectly--It couldn't be done better by any one
    Thank you,
    Love you, Baby for writing this for those left behind--they have the rougher toad.
    You whiped me if this is your answer to my challenge--you blindsided me--Hit me in the gut then stompped me--I cry fowl-- this not the subject area about which I was talking. So, I say again---Fowl.
    This poem is so great--it is wonderful.
    I am going to print it off giving you credit and put it in my office.
    bw

    Kind of misty


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    WOW. this is an outstanding poem. I absolutely love this so much. the emotions that I felt while reading this were very overwhelming. this is a great poem, one that touches the heart and pulls on the heart strings quite hard. For all the men and women who've served and their families, this poem is brilliant.

    I do need however to know which prompt that you've written this for..
    other than that, this write is outstanding.

    good luck in the contest

    kat


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Such a heartfelt write here

    To all the service men and women and their families I cry for their bravery and love for their country


  • Griswold
    September 4, 2008

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    Beautifully written sweetheart, a wonderful way to take the prompt and speak out. Love you baby...Scott


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Sorrowful and deep, and I am sure seeply personal to may readers on the site.
    Great stuff.
    Really good stuff.


  • Kari gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    I had a uncle that served but he stayed more or less homebase because of his computer skills. I really do feel for the ones that must go through this. I hope they realize they aren't alone and I applaud the families that go through this nightmare monthly. What a legacy to leave behind for the children.


  • Cannonsfire
    September 3, 2008

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    This makes me sad today, after reading the paper where 9 young men in the Australian army were killed in Afghanistan by a sniper's rocket attack. There are so many who live out this scene...far too many Loves ya lady C


  • Swan song gold member
    September 3, 2008
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    This is really something Very well done here This is something to be proud of!!!!

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