love blossomed
flowered under warmth
buzz of butterfly took wings
decibles unable to restrain
In each others arms
thoughts entwined
a light beam
with all hues merged
their love without breaks
touched farthest stars
deepest pecific
finding unknown targets
they are not two,
identities disappeared
become seperate
while stray thought
interfere,
awareness overtakes
cooling hot emotions
Author notes
credited to 'PHOTOBUCKET'
A contest entry
- Sensual PIF Picture Prompt! by perfectsunset.
550 points, ended September 11, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ooh very sensual and penned with deep passion.
Lovely thoughts & imagery in this.
I just noticed one grammar error you might
want to change "idetities" in the 4th stanza
to "identities".
This was an amazing write!
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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A warm and sensual write... beautifully done... great images (love "a light beam with all hues merged") Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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a wonderful take on the promt dad full of great emotions of love good luck in the contest maralisa
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they are not two,
idetities disappeared
Love the thoughts within those two lines, as well as the whole poem.
Best wishes to you in the contest
Julie
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thank you Julie
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