Oh love,
How you tempt me now.
Your whispers- are all I hear.
But change in weather is near
And these eyes can’t help but see
the snow- fall upon the trees.
Oh love,
Rest your head now.
Winter has come to claim thee.
Lie dormant in my heart now.
Its lullaby- a slow labored beat.
Savor its melody- until the spring.
A contest entry
- PREWRITE MADNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Kathraina.
650 points, ended August 15, 456 entries
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Wow, beautiful words written here!
The sense of emotions here are powerful, and the imagery lovely.
Bravo
♥ kate -
ohhh... Beautiful. Wonderfully written. I just savor your words.
I love poems on the transition of seasons. It always amazes me how many different ways it can be said.
wonderful
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A very calming , serene write. It has a nice flow and not too overdone on rhyming.
"Its lullaby- a slow labored beat.
Savor its melody- until the spring."
Strong ending there. I enjoyed the word choice and structure. Thank you for sharing.
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This poem had the ability to calm me and make me feel very peaceful. Before reading it I was a bit aggitated; so thank you.
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This is a beautiful poem and you have used some amazing imagery. It has a very soothing feel to it and I enjoyed reading this very much. Great job on this write! Blessings, Patty
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A very pleasant read, it flowed like a spring stream. I really liked this. Nice work. Cheers Tws...
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This was a wonderful read.. The imagery was so vivid and detailed! I'm amazed but the emotion in this piece.. It flowed so well.. You really did a wonderful job in creating something touching with this write.. Thank you very much for sharing!!
TA
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Oh how beautiful!! It flowed so sweet and soft! just lulled the reader.. The emotions in this write are so heartfelt and soft, it just sighs beauty.. You really did such a wonderful job in crafting such a tender image.. I really loved this.. Thank you very much for sharing..
Angel
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AWESOME!!!
Ok...dude, this is really, really good. What I am getting is a seriously sad, yet hopeful, love story of God knows what...is it a person?...is it a sports season?...is it just a season?...lol...I am not sure of what you have to laid to rest for the winter, but this poem ROCKS, my friend!!! True art is made when you actually make the viewer THINK--and you have DEFINITELY made me do that....100% cool...
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This is really good!!!! Wow. it's inspiring too. Thanks for the good read!
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