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Cinderella Man

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Homeless, jobless,a castaway in the heart of my own city!

A pickling hopelessness that laces my tongue,caustic and witty.

 

On a rainy day like this, I would sell my umbrella

and step in the impossibly small shoes of a Cinderella

(at least she had a happy ending, hope you get the drift)

I'll spit shine , thrive thriftily and do my 16 hour shift

but wisely invest my pennies and hope on pumpkins

(sighs) paying for pettiness and miscellaneous past sins.

 

As the rest has been repeatedly told and retold,

(Yawn) I will let the predicatable and obvious unfold,

Not attempting to alter the course of a charming fairy tale,

(that would leave my attempts 'bootless' and to no avail)

I would rather rejoice, in the arms of ever after and ever since,

whisked away to 'no troubles land', by a charming prince.

 

Last credit card 'REJECTED' breaks the spell

looking at the sky I can foretell

my lucky stars...

in their cellestial journey have certainly faltered!

and on being Cinderella...

'Do I really want my sex altered?'

 

 

 

 

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  • dustookie2
    September 5, 2008

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    I read this aloud a few times guess the sex change is up to you but too much information right now. Great take on the prompt .... well crafted. Thank you. Good luck in the contest.


    • inder silver member
      September 5, 2008
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      Lol! thanks for the encouragement and sympathies for my dilemma!


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 4, 2008

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    this is a different take on the prompt

    enjoyable and fun read you did a good job on this write


    thanks for entering the contest and good luck

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    • inder silver member
      September 5, 2008
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      Thank you so much for the bronze and all the encouragement. Hope you had fun conducting this contest!


    • inder silver member
      September 5, 2008
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      Good luck judging!

      Thank you. Was sure fun to depart
      from genres that normally appeal to the heart
      To loosen some screws in the head
      and still receive comments like "well said!"

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