A beautiful taste, to those who would take of it.
Something so sweet,
so lush...
... and thick...
...and red...
A bond like no other, could share if partaken.
Its tie is of two souls
...moreso, of two hearts...
[rather, the life that flows therein, and throughout until ceased by its final beat.]
The nighttime echos our bittersweet love song
of only our shallow breath
[accompanied by pleasure-pain whimpers
and breathless bemused sighs
in altogether symphony, a bewitching melody of our love]
Two bodies so passionately embraced.
Your hand entangled in my hair.
Your other hand cupping my breast.
My hands claw desperately at your pale, soft-skinned back.
[pulling you nearer, needing you deep]
[[inside]]
Perfect love, so wrought full of understanding and beauty.
I need your love to flow into me.
I need your heart to be one with mine.
I need your soul to fill my emptiness
[a void once hollow, but instantly fulfilled when I discovered that cool, calm ocean of blue-green iris within each of your captivating eyes].
I need your life.
I wish to take it for my own.
I wish to trade it for my own.
I wish to let it pervade my thoughts
...and my throat
...and coat my inner being with its sticky-sweet sustenance.
My soul begs to sacrifice
my very life unto you.
To cut open and bleed for you.
My life, my blood, sweetly filling your tongue with its flavor.
[and fulfilling your soul with my very existence]
Your thoughts are mine.
My thoughts are yours.
You pull my hair back, balling brown-black waves into your fist
as you expose my pale, nearly colorless neck.
[you bite]
... Grinding your sharp teeth into my delicate flesh
I wince and scream
but the pleasure overtakes my every nerve;
my release and tensionless relaxation subdue me throughout my body
[as my blood breaks through the flesh, flowing fluidly into your warm, suckling mouth]
My life is now within you--
...fulfilling you
...exciting you
...nourishing your hunger
...satisfying your craving
[i take of you the same.]
[[i drink you down like water.]]
My life.
[your blood.]
Your blood.
[my life.]
Author notes
mmmm vampire love.
tis dark.
and erotic.
i love it!
Dawn <3 Jaye
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- Listen to them, the children of the night. What songs they sing. by Myjoy.
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Comments
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Awesome work here!
I love the story line and the
imagery that flows throughout
this poem. Thanks a lot for
sharing this one here and keep
it up!
Jeremy0826

