As I hold you,
a faint fragrance of roses,
real or imagined, captures me.
Images of you blossom
in my mind…
the brightness of your smile
the lilting sound of your voice
the warmth of your arms
the pleasure of lying beside you.
The soft passion of holding
you warms my heart
with an intimacy borne
of unity of love.
Each embrace is a new
beginning and love blooms
again.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: photobucket.com
40 – 70 words
A contest entry
- Sensual PIF Picture Prompt! by perfectsunset.
550 points, ended September 11, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome but I Won't Turn Down Fluffy One's Either :D
Comments
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Very beautiful
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This was soft sensual and loving
simply beautiful
Good luck
~sugar~
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this is a very beautiful and sensual poem. excellent.. the imagery is vivid. this sounds wonderful and relaxing to be in the arms of the one you love. one could lost in your words..
good luck in the contest
kat
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This was such a passionately penned piece with sensuality elaborated gracefully & tenderly.
You delivered this piece with beautiful imagery
and emotional depth.
A wonderful write!
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Beautiful
Feelings are gentle and imagery of thoughts strong.
Best wishes in the contest
Julie
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I think that every gilr would like to think that a man feels this strongly about her....to be cherished and loved such as this would be a dream come true!! You are such a beautiful and sensual writer and it is always a delight to visit your brilliance! Best wishes
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