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Love can Kill

Love is a tourture to the human
soul, love does not give up
Love does not die it is there
every single seconed, It Can destroy
a person from the inside out

Love can make a person want
not to feel wanted love makes
pepole kill themselves
 

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  • prettyraiNboweyes
    September 22, 2008

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    wow

    wow is all I have to say but love is there through a new start love can fix those not so good parts love can show the good through everyone but it can also be the medicine to kill just have to be careful have to be sure love can take you leading to forever.

    fine poem short but excellent. you make the point its great at first then it can hurt. emotion is good here. thankyou for sharing.

    -maddie


  • Lonely Christina
    September 20, 2008
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    i 100% agree with this...it defiantly can kill a person. good job on this
    xoxo- christina