You greasy, devious, obnoxious, raunchy, twit
I wish you were a figment of my imagination
Instead you’re like a crunchy barnacle attached to my butt
Open you eyes you’re living in a fantasy world of your own
You’re tall, with acid breath; even more you act like a slut
You greasy, devious, obnoxious, raunchy, twit
You would sell your soul for five rubles and change
I’m not just saying this to vent about what happened yesterday
When I broke an umbrella on your head and used pepper spray
I will be happy to repeat my actions if I see your face today
You greasy, devious, obnoxious, raunchy, twit
This is the last time you approach my man and live
You can quote that Zen stuff all you want, I believe in fisticuffs
Keep your nosy behind on your side of the fence or you’ll see
I’m not soft and even more if need be; I will get really rough
You greasy, devious, obnoxious, raunchy, twit
killing you would be so easy I’d be happy to do it in a jiffy
Acid would leave no trace, not even x-ray could find
There wouldn’t be enough of you to pick up with a Q-tip
Said the wife to the neighbor in a voice, only icy can define
Author notes
OPTION THREE Word Bank:
(Acid, Barnacle, Crunchy, Devious, Easy, Figment, Greasy, Happy, Icy, Jiffy, Killing, Living, More, Nosy, Open, Pepper, Q-tip, Rubles, Soft, Tall, Umbrella, Vent, Wife, X-ray, Yesterday, Zen.)
ALMOST OPTION TWO:
I'm to long winded to do Option two justice with just six syllables so I was a little creative if that's okay
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amazing, i really liked how you used the word raunchy!!! hah thank you for entering my contest
love forever and always
Ciara Ann -
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Thank you so much for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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LOL...I love it! Very creative and well written...the flow is wonderful and the word choice so fun...you have a great repeat line and it is wonderful form, even if it is not a Monchielle...it is a great form that is all yours...well written and fun to read...
Best to you!
mystic
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leaving such a wonderfuly comment. God Bless you, Jo-Ann
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Oooh!
This was awesome cool! You used ALL the words in the word bank, as far as I could see, and though you didn't keep it to six syllables per line that a Monchielle should have, or the rhythm, it had the repeating first line, and the rhyming 3rd and 5th line, plus the four stanzas. You get A for effort! You did an excellent job, and for that you are hereby a finalist. Good luck in the contest.
Jim
Score: 6.3
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