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Diamond Dust, the Kind You Speak

Sparkling thoughts like diamonds
Encased inside a cavern
Taboo glimpses of the hidden
An utmost inviting void
Spilled with concept waterfalls
Affixed soul for it's bidding
Aligning the foam of the waters
Riverbends run though the midnight walls
Lips spill diamond dust
Counterfeit reality inside an arcane beacon

Author notes

3. Brilliance is being able to lie about your shortcomings till even you believe it.

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  • penman gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    September 4, 2008

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    a great take on the promt with some brilliant imagery from line one through to line nine good luck in the contest