A boys Life

One day a boy became obssesive about hitler
Two Days later he becam obssevive about daeth
Three Days later he became Emo AS a joke huge mistake
he starts turning the one thing he vowed not to become
The one thing that started to destroy him from inside out

The one thing that will make him destry what he has fought for

A boys life is ruined

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xXemo-teddybearXx
November 24, 2008

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wow that wuz really good
i really liked it alot
just one question i hav for u
ur not an anti emo person,or r u
btw it could be longer
but if u dont do that
its still really good
raindropwords
September 3, 2008

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very good
this reminds me of one of my friends.
i love how it gives the time frame.

my only advice, make a longer poem like this. i have a feeling it would be even better.
=]

<3 Morgan