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FORBIDDEN Chemistry

That feeling of dare, arise suspcions within our minds.
As tempting as it may be, it is Forbidden
to have such feelings for someone who belongs to another.
The Chemistry combines our souls,
like nothing I've felt before...
or is it that of which I've missed?
Slowly the rain of your love
trickles down my erect breasts, as
I feel your nature rise with passion.
Fantasizing of your touch, slowly undressing me,
sucking the tip of my nose, while your hands
play me, softly
fully erect, I know it's not right.
The damage has already been done, because you see...
I want you just as bad, and I don't want for you to stop.

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Now ain't that sumthin?

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  • ennovy silver member
    November 11, 2008

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    What a magnificent read, and your talent once agin speaks louder, in every way. You have culled some strong sexual feelings here...You have planted a tree, that will never stop growing....you wrote the write...G'Momma


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 5, 2008
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    Dat sure is sumthin sissy pooh

    LOL I can see you have been back to your naughty self with these last few writes

    and pssssst sometimes the grass is greener lolllll
    just playing with you sissy, hope you and yours been well

    Tasha


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    September 19, 2008

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    This is erotic and has a strong tension in it. The essence of forbidden is the essence of our own inner wisdom knowing, into the marrow of each and every bone that 'forbidden' is exploration, 'forbidden' is freedom, 'forbidden' taunts us with our own inability to accept physical freedom as being less necessary than political freedom, and, in fact, it is not, and our tense temptations make this realization create a dark, bright sweetness exist even where we dare not tread, and when we do, its lusciousness is almost too much for our minds to accept as a great truth, which, in many ways it is, but we live lifes of busyness denying the magic of perhaps a better way to be ... sexuality in these realms is our answer to needs which must be taken seriously, but not as permanent fixtures in our lives. I blab too much. Sorry.




    • Ephiphany
      November 13, 2008
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      Thanks

      I really appreciate your comments, and I don't think u blab too much keep on being you thanks again.


  • darell
    September 15, 2008

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 15, 2008

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    Indeed this is sumthing little Sis...I guess arzab has it right....people wanting things they can't have or thinking the grass is always greener on the other side of the gate....

    Loved your poetry,
    missed reading some of your masterpieces

    XXJeannette


    • Ephiphany
      September 15, 2008

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      Thank you sissy poo

      missed you so much...you don't lubb me anymore
      Oh why.....


  • HaleyMary
    September 6, 2008

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    Ooh, naughty, Sis. This had lots of passion in it and I like the concept of forbidden love. Somehow when love is forbidden, it seems all the more tempting. I guess it all comes down to people wanting what they can't have in life. Thanks for sharing your talent and keep that pen flowing.


    • Ephiphany
      September 6, 2008
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      Thank you lil sis

      I appreciate you always
      Take care punkin.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 6, 2008

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    OuuLalala!!!!

    You brought it here, and now it's Hott!!!
    I like the way you put in out there so potent and powerfully!
    Nothing like that good bad, but I wouldn't know anything about that!

    Much love and light, the weaver~


  • moon2u
    September 6, 2008

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    naughty pisces this is hot stuff
    forbidden love
    why does everything forbidden taste better?

    hugs moon2u

    • Ephiphany
      September 6, 2008
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      Hi there.
      Yes, you are right...most forbidden things does taste better
      Thanks for the comment, I really appreciate your visit.

      E


  • oneal
    September 6, 2008

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    I love the conflict, the double thoughts that you display so well in this poem. And the intimacy, very good.

    You always deliver.

    Oneal


    • Ephiphany
      September 6, 2008
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      Thanks Love Poet

      I appreciate your comments always.
      E

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    September 5, 2008

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    HI Sissy pooh
    great piece you've written here that I can most definately identify with.

    I have been in this place where the temptation is so strong it makes you question everything else in your life....or rather mine at the time.

    only in my case it helped me see what i had to do, to leave....best decision of my life

    you're write reminded me of all this.

    well done hon....miss ya and love ya

    ~Tasha

    xoxo


    • Ephiphany
      September 5, 2008
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      thanks sissy poo I really appreciate your comment on this.

      e


  • cep2008
    September 4, 2008
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    irresistible

    "now aint that somthin?" I can vouch 4 that.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    This is great and I know many of us understand!

    As tempting as it may be, it is Forbidden
    to have such feelings for someone who belongs to another.
    The Chemistry combines our souls,
    like nothing I've felt before...
    or is it that of which I've missed?


    • Ephiphany
      September 5, 2008
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      Thanks hottness

      I really appreciate your comment.

      e


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 4, 2008

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    Such science should never be forbidden dear! lmao
    Lovely work as always and I hope that you are doing
    well. Take care and have a wonderful day my friend!




    Jeremy0826


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    September 3, 2008

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    this was nice hon i think you gave the topic and the pic a run for its money totally great job i liked it

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