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By the banks of Lake Clarity

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 Picture by Frozentearz

 

I will rise and step forth, wander down to Lake Clarity ,
And a tiny pathway take, of childhood-placed pebbles made:
Twelve gnomes will I have there, and by the bank, cider or tea,
Then play truant with old friends in deep pool-side shade.

And I shall invite you there, sixty years in a trice, passing slow ...
Dripping from oars of morning's canoe, where kingfishers sing;
There ten o'clock's a-shimmer, and noon a pleasant glow,
And twilight's blessed with Kurrawongs on wing.

I will rise and step forth, for voices by night or by day
Call back lake water, lapping low, dancing to days of yore;
While I survey this high range, under skies of grey,
I still hear its deep blue splash for my soul, my core.

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Prompt: Write to the picture above.
By Ron.

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  • cheaphotelsign
    December 10, 2008

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    wow...this is breathtaking...oozing beautiful colors in images tasted with the tongue and falling eyes...incredible language...made me feel child-like in my writing shoes...i'm so stupified and in awe ...love love it


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    I agree that this has great depth, imagery and is wonderfully penned. I was lost in your words throughout. Thanks for entering and best wishes

    Frogz~


  • Frozentearz
    September 5, 2008

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    Lots of depth within this one, you have taken it from the soul and poured it to pen, a wonderful wonderful take on the prompt.
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz