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Where'er

Allow heart to inseminate each level,
where'er our love lodges;
while in ecstasy, naked we revel.

Turn willing sea o'er upon bluest earth,
where'er our love lodges;
to gift towards soft wet whispers rebirth.

Let stars stand in awe of fulfillment known,
where'er our love lodges;
in eternity never overthrown.

 

 

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    Stunning and I awe in the beauty of your poem
    Many congratulations on the Gold
    Best wishes
    Julie


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 8, 2008
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    LOVED this. This was exactly what I was looking for. You got it all; passion, romance, love, sensual with class, imagery, metaphor, ect ect. The list can go on.
    This was just exceptional and so very beautifully penned. Bravo!

    Thanks for entering & best of luck


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Bro, no matter what you pen, it is always most beautiful. This one is no exception. I'd wish you luck, but pfft, you don't need it! Awesome as always!


  • KayJay
    September 4, 2008

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    "soft wet whispers" You do have a way with words This is a beautiful write and fills the page with great images of love and more... Well done and best of luck, sir...
    Ken


  • kishi-tenshi
    September 4, 2008
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    terrific!
    the imagery is really something!!!
    love this!!


  • Kari gold member
    September 4, 2008
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    This was so lovely and so very true. In the third line you really nailed the truth.


  • Age of Rain
    September 3, 2008
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    Your title made me giggle. Your poem made me giggle...er.

    'inseminate' *snorts and laughs* Though this technically can mean sow... well... *grins*

    the repetition was great, I loved the use of 'revel.'

    I just wanted it to be longer... but still, a good end!


    • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
      September 3, 2008

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      Couldn't go over 70 words, I think it said.
      Glad you can laugh at my serious poem. lol

      Were'er you go, there thou art.


      • Age of Rain
        September 3, 2008

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        I'm sorry, I am just a juvenile soul at heart. And inseminate made me giggle... This was good and you should know it!


        • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
          September 3, 2008
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          If knowing is vanity than call me vain.
          Though I too am somewhat juvenile at heart.

          Don't suppose that any offense was taken.

          *burp*


  • FlamesDragoness
    September 3, 2008

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    honorable poem

    the words of a poet with a bold soul indeed.
    Have you a warriors heart to defeat the darkest
    of soldier that feast upon the heart of man.
    flamingdragoness


  • Cannonsfire
    September 3, 2008
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    Sigh...sensually just lovely


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 3, 2008
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    i like this
    its really well written and intesry\ting

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