Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Della Dance (Limerick)

A quite clumsy young belle was Della
Never seen without her umbrella
Although seldom she danced
One day by wind enhanced
Belle Della danced the Tarantella

Author notes

Option 3.Updraft by olafala at deviantart.com

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • piccola silver member
    November 24, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this was quite visual and I can see what happened when the wind blew. Hope she was wearing her knickers thank you for entering


  • Gypsie Ink
    September 8, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    Cute!

    Charming and youthful. A cheeky write. Thank you for your fresh entry and best of luck in my contest.


  • Miss Faith
    September 6, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    I quite enjoyed this.


  • no longer a member
    September 4, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    this made me chuckle.

    good limerick. ~Bramble