Two people living different lives
Two hearts racing through time
I never in a million years
Dreamed you could be mine
I love the way you look at me
How your eyes sink deep into mine
And with each silent moment
Our souls further intertwine
Your smile speaks more volumes
Then words could ever express
Don't ever change a thing baby
Its not me you need to impress
For try as I might
I fell for you fast
And I wish for no more
Then for this love to last
I find myself thinking about you
Every minute that goes by
I sigh every time I see your picture
And say man I love this guy
How can something so perfect
So wonderful and true
Be mine to hold every day
How'd I get a guy like you?
You are my best friend first
Someone I can really trust
I know that you're here to stay
That im more to you then lust
I just want you to know
How much I really care
That no matter how things are
I will ALWAYS be there....
be honest, tell me what you think.
Comments
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In line 20, I feel as though quotes around what you are saying wuold make it easier to read.
In line 28, "im" is "I'm", right?
It's a very sweet poem, and I like it alot. -
I like the himility part of the impressions hidden behind the words ..the tone and the impact as well..is very soothing..well done...
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amazing, it reminds me so much of my girlfriend its crazy, i love the poem and the honest love it expresses, good work =)
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