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Lies of Love

A mindless eye of
repossession..
A mysterious way to annihilation..
A nasty place of mutilation..
I die for your life..
I pay for your sins..
and you destroy me deep from
within..
I live in hate..
I walk in misery..
I die with love..
I lived for your life and
I died without my own..

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  • Manish
    September 5, 2008

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    Quite sad. I like the lines: ...walk in misery, die with love, lived for your life ... died without my own. Very well written. Well thought and felt. Touched me deep.


  • evanna
    September 4, 2008

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    there is no better ending than this one:

    I lived for your life and
    I died without my own..

    very intense poem..and very beautiful