Smoke and Ash

I'm sitting watching smoke fade,
And ashes turn to dust.
Knowing feelings always haze,
Knowing heartache is a must.

But if we let our thoughts drop,
we'll leave the hate behind.
knowing it'll never stop,
but our hearts will be just fine.

A contest entry

Without Rules by reckless abandon. 900 points, ended September 6, 2008, 113 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your oldest prewrite poems and my 20th contest by stargazer.. 650 points, ended April 20, 417 entries
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sure. :)

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Abominangel.
June 8

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nice
im terrible at letting thoughts drop ... man, i feel like im back in love with someone right now when it ended months ago haha

i liked this dude, keep it up
- no-way-ap
  June 22
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  yeah, its hard for me to clear my head sometimes. I'm gladyou enjoyed this, at least I know there's someone out there that feels the same.
Salt Therapy
November 11, 2008

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I love this. short is always nice. says a lot within a few words good job
reckless abandon
September 3, 2008

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I like how much is in this compared to its length. THe last two lines are my favorite. THanks for entering and good luck.
- no-way-ap
  September 7, 2008
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  thanks.:)
  i'm kinda glad i didnt win. i dont think it was that great..just kinda too true. bleh. but no, yeah..thanks.
MissxoxMassacre
September 3, 2008
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good
I liked this a lot. Good way to put everything together, nice job.
- no-way-ap
  September 3, 2008
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  thanks.:)
  its sad how everything looks put together, but i still have peices left over. sighh.
  
  coming from a poet like you it means a lot. really. thanks.