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hope...Can you stop this?
The depth defying heights that surround us within its grasps…
hope...Can we help it?
The screeches and slurs of those who were once lost long before us.
hope...Can you taste it?
The salty remedies beneath your tongue that remind you of what you've become.
Stop:...hear this ..taste this...help us...
Is there a thing called love and compassion in the cruelty of this world?
Is there anyone out there who will save us…redeem us?
"We're all hanging by a thread and this isn't the end"…I promise you.

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  • alesana
    September 21, 2008
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    Great write, i sung it as i read it.


  • going nowhere
    September 5, 2008

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    this was an amazing write... each line seemed to weave into eachother with a message that leaves me to ponder.


  • xMissHollie
    September 4, 2008
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    <3 Every single little thing you write is amazing.xx