Capture me darling
In your spell
Hold me tight with arms so strong
Turn me so our lips brush lightly
Our bodies swaying to and fro.
I am yours forever
And you are mine
Kiss me quickly before the night comes
Take away all of my pain
Let me see tomorrow in your eyes.
A contest entry
- Sensual PIF Picture Prompt! by perfectsunset.
550 points, ended September 11, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Aww this was so beautiful & heartfelt spilling emotions of love. Wonderful take on the prompt, really kept me interested and wanting to read more.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Nicely done... warm, sensual, and full of love... Best of luck...
Ken
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very well done. the heart opened its heart to all and let us see into the mind of an individual who longs to be loved.
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