Nobody

This is to say goodbye

to all the betrayal we've endured

Did you know that at night

while you are away at work

I cry from the time you leave

Pleasantry no longer a promise

as thoughts roam her baffled mind

while reminiscing lost days of romance.

Blankly starring into the darkness

I can no longer

be your whipping post

for I am ... Nobody

Author notes

Drawn from other poems of mine.

STEP ONE: Take the last line of the latest poem you have written and put that as your TITLE.

STEP TWO: Take now the first two lines of your second most recent poem, this will be the first lines of the poem.

STEP THREE: Go to the next poem in your collection and take the first three lines.

STEP FOUR: Now go to the forth latest poem in your collection and take the first four lines.

FINAL STEP: The last three lines of your poem will come from the first poem in your collection. BUT these lines will be the LAST three lines of that poem

A contest entry

Pretty Awesome Neat Poem Contest. :D by No longer in use. 300 points, ended September 6, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Please tell me what you think

Comments

By me, right now

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Lady Australis
September 3, 2008
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you are not no body
beacuse your an amzeing person
No longer in use
September 3, 2008

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I cry. Wonderful Deep. See it's nice to see that people write all of the same thing...because this is perfect. It all fits and not just all over the place...which would be perfectly random...but then there is the wonderment in knowing that there...isn't...Ok I have no idea what I'm saying so....

Wonderful job and best of wishes.
Emcchesney
September 3, 2008

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this was powerful and enchanting. this was a great read that draws the reader in and tantalizes them with words of mastery.