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Can You Feel It?

The love that I have for you is powerful,
Full of lust and greed...can you feel it?
Grabbing you, forcing myself on you,
The flames of carnage ignite the solar flares
Of the rings of the nearest Galactic Star.

Sweat glistening on the curves of your mighty form.
Getting the signal that the game is on,
I lunge towards the fields of ever lasting pleasure.
The call of the wild is heard through the system of noise.
Searing bunny dancing luring me into the abyss sin.

Can you feel it? The energy of others not knowing,
Not understanding the desire that needs to be filled by
Running on the side and jumping into the box of nasty.
The stars dance around you tonight, aura of love-lust
Is becoming of the lady that you never will be...Can you feel it?

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  • ArchOblivion
    September 3, 2008

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    "jumping into the box of nasty" That is probably one of the best lines I've ever heard. Loved it, I felt like i was peeping in on something i shouldn't. Supposed to feel that way? great work as usual


  • Dangerousparable silver member
    September 3, 2008
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    Tight

    Like a glove.
    just right