Whispers ( Silver )

I am your hunger,

taste my desires.

Feel me,

caressing strokes upon strands of spun gold.

Scents of Rosewater,

bathes softness of skin.

Embrace so close,

curves of womanhood wrapped.

Thoughts in waiting,

ever wishing for the moment.

Lust mirrors first meeting,

we delved into submission.

Love flourishing in folds of satin,

lightly we glide to the wings of passion.

Whispering....

Author notes

--Please credit PHOTOBUCKET--

40-70 words

In a list

{ Silver } • next in list

A contest entry

Sensual PIF Picture Prompt! by perfectsunset. 550 points, ended September 11, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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princessleejwctlvr2
September 24, 2008
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This is so lovely!! I would have given you gold!!
Cerulean Sunrise
September 11, 2008
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it's wonderful. Congrats on the silver.
cindy4
September 11, 2008
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beautiful
perfectsunset
September 8, 2008

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Wow this was so elegantly sensual. Full of love, passion, and true sentiments. I loved this piece.
Truly a masterpiece.

Thanks so much for sharing & best of luck
- Reptile Lady
  September 11, 2008
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  Thanks hun
  I enjoyed writing x
onesugar
September 5, 2008

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A wonderfully sensual take on the prompt,
the feeling of love and desire flows from the page
beautiful
Good luck hon
~sugar~
Fritz O skennick
September 5, 2008

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Beautifully penned...
Such imagery & passion in your words...
Soft, tender & stirring...
Sensuality becomes you in this well crafted tale of yearning & submission...
Off for a cold shower now (lol!)
Well done!!!
KayJay
September 4, 2008

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Beautiful, sensual, erotic... you have a lovely touch with your words and paint images straight from dreams... Well done!
Ken
storiesuntold
September 4, 2008
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This is so lovely
I love the way your writes always makes me feel and such love described throughout .Bravo
daviscth
September 4, 2008

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You do sensual so beautifully Julie!! I just love the imagery in this poem. Good luck in the contest dear.
maralisa
September 4, 2008

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wow julie a fantastic take on the promt with some beautiful imagery from stanza one through to stanza seven I loved stanzas three,four and seven good luck in the contest
LadyDementia
September 4, 2008

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Oh wowzy! Very steamy! A beautiful take on the picture and so softly done hun. Excellent write, you sure have a knack for sensual All the best in the contest but with this you shouldn't need it